Friday, December 11, 2015

TED talk assignment

Choose a topic that you are passionate about and one that you want to share with others. Consider also how engaging your topic will be to your audience (your peers mainly, although the wider Cheshire Academy community could be included in your audience, especially if you are considering using this speech to fulfill your graduation requirement).

Make sure your topic is narrow enough so your speech will not be too vague, but also make sure it is not too narrow so that you will have enough material to fill approximately 5 minutes of speaking.
 Some students may choose a topic that models a “Problem/Solution” type of format, whereas others may wish to format the topic in a “This I Believe” style – you have a lot of freedom in choosing a topic, and your topic may get changed or refined as you begin your research and consider what you truly want to say.

A five-minute speech, spoken at an average rate, should be approximately 650 words long, so that should be your guideline for writing this speech. All speeches need to contain the following elements:
1.       An engaging opening strategy or “hook” that catches the audience’s attention
2.       Well-organized content (different points separated into different paragraphs)
3.       At least three credible sources consulted on your topic
4.       At least one credible source quoted in the speech
5.       A clear “Takeaway” for the audience: boiling down your main point to a few sentences
6.       A strong closing strategy to leave the audience with something profound to think about

This project will be a multi-step process. First, you need to brainstorm and choose a topic. Then, you need to complete substantive research (the final calls for at least 3 credible sources, but you may need to consult as many as 10 sources until you find the appropriate information). Next, you will write and revise several drafts of your speech. After that, you will memorize and deliver the speech in class, and you will have the opportunity for several “takes” with feedback given in between. Finally, you will turn your speech into a multimedia TED talk type of speech, video it or use iMovie to enhance it, upload it to YouTube, and post it on your blog.


Monday, October 26, 2015

Speech Evaluation Rubric

Introduction 

Did it capture attention & interest?
Was the topic introduced clearly?
Was the topic related to the audience?
Did the speaker have topic-credibility?
Was the body of the speech previewed?

Body 

Were the main points clear?
Were the main points supported?
Were the main points logically presented?
Were the transitions between main points clear & effective?

Conclusion 

Was the transition to the end of the speech signaled?
Was there a summary of principal points?
Was there an effective close and/or call to action?

Language 

Was the language used appropriate for the topic & the audience
Was the language varied?

Delivery 

Were the notes, visual aids etc. organized before the start?
Was the beginning poised?
Was there good use of eye contact?
Was the body language (posture & gesture) controlled & effective?
Was the speaking rate - flexible & effective?
Was the speaking volume appropriate & varied?
Was there fluency, an absence of fillers like 'ahs' & 'ums'?
Was vocal variety used, changes in pitch & tone, & good use of pausing?
Did the speaker show enthusiasm for the topic?
Were there visual aids & were they appropriate & integrated into the speech?
Did the speech finish with poise?

Overall evaluation 

Did the speaker achieve the assignment's purpose?
Was the topic researched?
Did the topic adapt well to the audience?
Were the audience interested?
Was the speech completed within the time limit?

Friday, October 23, 2015

Friday, October 23rd

Hi all,

I will be at the Wally Lamb author talk during class today. so Mr. Poisson will be covering class (be nice to him and well-behaved! No yelling out the window or any other shenanigans!).

We will finish the Lightning Round Debates on Monday instead of today.

Today, instead, we will start the How-To Speech Project. Here are your instructions for today's class:


How-To Speech:


The first project in the speech unit is the "How-To Speech." Please read this entire webpage: http://www.write-out-loud.com/demonstration-speech-topics.html including clicking on the links for the speech template outline and sample evaluation. Then choose three topics that you might be interested in writing about, and write a short paragraph on each about why those might be good topics. Post the topics and paragraphs on your blog.


This is also posted on the portal under the Topic "Speeches." If you do not finish during class, finish for homework.

Have a good weekend!

Friday, October 9, 2015

Changes to Debate 2 Structure

We decided in class on the following structure for Debate 2:

Opening Statement: 2 minutes each

Rebuttals: 1.5 minutes each

Closing Statement: 2.5 minutes each

The topic is: the effect of social media on teens -- Jyotsna's group argues for the positive side, and Hannah's group argues for the negative side

Thursday, October 8, 2015

Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Elements of Debate

Some things to consider for the upcoming debate unit:

1. Here is a good resource for definitions of the three elements of argument/persuasion (excerpted from pathosethoslogos.com):


Ethos, Pathos, and Logos Definition and Examples




Ethos, Pathos, and Logos are modes of persuasion used to convince audiences. They are also referred to as the three artistic proofs (Aristotle coined the terms), and are all represented by Greek words.




Ethos or the ethical appeal, means to convince an audience of the author’s credibility or character.


An author would use ethos to show to his audience that he is a credible source and is worth listening to. Ethos is the Greek word for “character.” The word “ethic” is derived from ethos.





Ethos can be developed by choosing language that is appropriate for the audience and topic (also means choosing proper level of vocabulary), making yourself sound fair or unbiased, introducing your expertise or pedigree, and by using correct grammar and syntax.


Pathos or the emotional appeal, means to persuade an audience by appealing to their emotions.


Authors use pathos to invoke sympathy from an audience; to make the audience feel what what the author wants them to feel. A common use of pathos would be to draw pity from an audience. Another use of pathos would be to inspire anger from an audience; perhaps in order to prompt action. Pathos is the Greek word for both “suffering” and “experience.” The words empathy and pathetic are derived from pathos.





Pathos can be developed by using meaningful language, emotional tone, emotion evoking examples, stories of emotional events, and implied meanings.


Logos or the appeal to logic, means to convince an audience by use of logic or reason.


To use logos would be to cite facts and statistics, historical and literal analogies, and citing certain authorities on a subject.Logos is the Greek word for “word,” however the true definition goes beyond that, and can be most closely described as “the word or that by which the inward thought is expressed, Lat. oratio; and, the inward thought itself, Lat. Ratio. (1) The word “logic” is derived from logos.





Logos can be developed by using advanced, theoretical or abstract language, citing facts (very important), using historical and literal analogies, and by constructing logical arguments.


In order to persuade your audience, proper of Ethos, Pathos and Logos is necessary.


Examples of Ethos, Logos and Pathos:


Example of Ethos:


"I will end this war in Iraq responsibly, and finish the fight against al Qaeda and the Taliban in Afghanistan. I will rebuild our military to meet future conflicts. But I will also renew the tough, direct diplomacy that can prevent Iran from obtaining nuclear weapons and curb Russian aggression. I will build new partnerships to defeat the threats of the 21st century: terrorism and nuclear proliferation; poverty and genocide; climate change and disease. And I will restore our moral standing, so that America is once again that last, best hope for all who are called to the cause of freedom, who long for lives of peace, and who yearn for a better future."


Democratic Presidential Candidate Acceptance Speech by Barack Obama. August 28th, 2008.


Example of Pathos:


"I am not unmindful that some of you have come here out of great trials and tribulations. Some of you have come fresh from narrow jail cells. And some of you have come from areas where your quest -- quest for freedom left you battered by the storms of persecution and staggered by the winds of police brutality. You have been the veterans of creative suffering. Continue to work with the faith that unearned suffering is redemptive. Go back to Mississippi, go back to Alabama, go back to South Carolina, go back to Georgia, go back to Louisiana, go back to the slums and ghettos of our northern cities, knowing that somehow this situation can and will be changed."


I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King Jr. August 28th, 1963.


Example of Logos:


"However, although private final demand, output, and employment have indeed been growing for more than a year, the pace of that growth recently appears somewhat less vigorous than we expected. Notably, since stabilizing in mid-2009, real household spending in the United States has grown in the range of 1 to 2 percent at annual rates, a relatively modest pace. Households' caution is understandable. Importantly, the painfully slow recovery in the labor market has restrained growth in labor income, raised uncertainty about job security and prospects, and damped confidence. Also, although consumer credit shows some signs of thawing, responses to our Senior Loan Officer Opinion Survey on Bank Lending Practices suggest that lending standards to households generally remain tight."







2. An experienced debater, Daniel Paulnock, identifies the following items as essential elements of debate:




ANALYSIS: Identifying and arguing the major issues of the debate, with points also considered for effectiveness of cross-examination.




REASONING: Effectively creating clash by arguing and presenting one side of the debate, extending an argument, turning the opponent's arguments against them, exposing faulty logic and extending an argument based on a major item of evidence.




EVIDENCE: Quality of sources, applying the evidence to a specific argument, using evidence to support major arguments, showing how well the evidence is understood.




ORGANIZATION: Structure of the spoken presentation. For example, the introduction, the arguments and summary. How the tone followed the flow of the debate. Was the presentation coherent and how effectively was time utilized.




REFUTATION: Effectively weakening the opponent's arguments, creating clash and addressing all arguments in the debate.




DELIVERY: Vocal clarity, correct pronunciation, poise, gestures, eye contact, projection of personality, sentence structure and grammar.

Friday, September 25, 2015

Beating the Fear of Public Speaking

This week, with the dramatic monologues, I have seen a lot of people stretching themselves outside their comfort zones and working hard to set their inner actor free. Of course, all of us are still working on conquering our fear of Public Speaking (the most common fear in North America)!

I found this blog post written by Nick Morgan from Forbes Magazine (8/15/2015) that offers some tips:

How Can You Deal With The Fear Of Public Speaking?
I’ve recently been reminded that one of the universal constants in the public speaking world is fear. Most speakers have it, a few manage to avoid it, and some are crushed by it. A recent article about a survey of UK CEOs found that they, too, experience fear. Recent work with a client involved helping him with his fear of opening a speech. He’s fine once he gets going, but those first few minutes are debilitating. And I recently gave a speech after taking about a month off to work on a book proposal, and I found myself rusty and nervous just like everyone else.

What can you do about it? Here are 5 ideas to help you with that universal annoyance.

1. Redefine the fear as adrenaline, and therefore a good thing.This is my personal favorite, and it works pretty well if you stick to it over a long period of time. When we’re faced with having to speak in front of a crowd – or the prospect of one – the adrenaline starts flowing. It’s the well-known flight-or-fight syndrome that helps you get ready to do battle with ancient enemies. In addition to the annoying symptoms like dry mouth, or shaky knees, or clammy palms, your brain works faster, you have more energy, and you look a little larger than life. And that’s all good. So focus on the good things that those symptoms are bringing you, and you’ll start to think differently about those clammy palms.

2. Rehearse, rehearse, rehearse. Rehearse a lot. Rehearsal is the best way to deal with nerves, objectively speaking, because what you do a lot you get comfortable with and thus are less likely to get frightened about. Rehearsal has the added benefit of most likely making you better at the presentation – certainly better than if you wing it. And you’ll look more polished because your body will signal to the audience, “I’ve done this before; I’m cool.”

3. Breathe deeply, from the belly. Breathe slowly, and often.Breathing is good for you, your voice, and your composure. A slow, deep belly breath supported from the diaphragmatic muscles will start an autonomic relaxation response that nicely counteracts those feelings of terror, so start at the first sign of symptoms. Because those belly breaths will ground you, make sure you do them just before you get up to speak – while you’re being introduced, for example.

4. Focus on the audience, not on yourself. The real insight at the core of successful public speaking is that it isn’t about you, it’s about the audience getting it (or you were never there, in some sense). So focus on the audience, let go of yourself, and have a great time. I think of this as the Zen insight into public speaking, and it is truly liberating if you can convince yourself of it.

5. Focus on an emotion that you want to convey to the audience.If you’re the sort of speaker who starts riffing on all the things that might go wrong when you get nervous about speaking, then you’re like most of us. The idea is to replace that doom loop with something more productive. For a host of reasons, replacing nervous mental chatter with a strong emotion is a great substitute. Here’s how you do it. First, figure out what emotion is appropriate to the beginning of your speech. It might be anger, joy, excitement, whatever. Then, recall a time when you felt that emotion naturally and strongly. But don’t just remember it – relive it. Recall what it smelled, tasted, looked, sounded and felt like. Shut your eyes and put yourself there. With practice, this can become a powerful and quick way to focus before speaking. And if you do this sense memory thoroughly enough, you’ll chase the nervous thoughts out of your head.

We all get nervous, but there are ways to minimize nerves, and to use the mental state to your advantage, to make you a better speaker. Try them all, and pick the one or ones that works best for you.

Thursday, September 3, 2015

Notes from the First Week



On Wednesday, we began to explore the crucial elements of effective Public Speaking. I noticed that most students did not take notes or take a photo of the information written on the board. Therefore, I am condensing those ideas into some notes here. (However, in future classes, you should take your own notes.) Bolded words are some of the terminology that you will be responsible for on the Final Exam.


VOICE

a) Be loud (project)
b) Be clear (enunciate and articulate)
c) Speak slowly (pacing)
d) Vary your delivery -- don't be monotone


BODY

a) Be firm and confident
b) Look up and make eye contact
c) Try not to sway, fidget, or slouch
d) Use gestures appropriately -- but don't overdo it (like Ms. G!)


TONE

a) Be confident
b) Use a serious tone when you want the audience to take you seriously
c) Use humor to engage an audience -- but don't overdo it


SPEECH STRUCTURE

a) Beginning: catch attention, introduce topic (general to specific)
b) Middle: meat of your ideas
c) End: recap main idea, reverse of beginning (specific to general)